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) Replaced ‘Varnos harbour’ with ‘Varnos Harbour’. Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘court cavalry’ with ‘Court Cavalry’. Replaced ‘quayside, then’ with ‘quayside; then’.
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176
) Replaced ‘forest of Salony’ with ‘Forest of Salony’. Replaced ‘great forest’ with ‘Great Forest’.
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177
) Replaced ‘riverbank’ with ‘river bank’. Replaced ‘city walls’ with ‘city's walls’.
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178
) Replaced ‘the Tower’ with ‘the tower’. Replaced ‘the Tower's’ with ‘the tower's’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘cloud of Kai arrows are’ with ‘cloud of Kai arrows is’.
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179
) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
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180
) Replaced ‘Kai master’ with ‘Kai Master’. Replaced ‘layed’ with ‘laid’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘replies,’ with ‘replies.’. Replaced ‘though’ with ‘Though’. Split Rimoah's comments into a separate paragraph for clarity. Replaced ‘hopes;’ with ‘hopes:’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘lavas'’ with ‘Lavas'’.
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183
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) Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’.
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) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘face-down’ with ‘face down’.
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188
) Replaced ‘Lune).’ with ‘Lune, which has the equivalent value of 10 Gold Crowns. It takes up the same space in your Belt Pouch as would 10 Gold Crowns.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘you (if’ with ‘you. (If’. Replaced ‘Potion).’ with ‘Potion.)’. Replaced ‘mule, then’ with ‘mule; then’.
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189
) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’. Replaced ‘Kai alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
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) Replaced ‘zig-zags’ with ‘zigzags’. Replaced ‘who've’ with ‘who have’ in the illustration caption.
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191
) Replaced ‘Meal and’ with ‘Meal or’.
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192
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
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193
) Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’.
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194
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘says, ‘I’ with ‘says. ‘I’. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced ‘words: HALLS OF LEARNING’ with ‘words ‘Halls of Learning’ ’.
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195
) Replaced ‘5–−8’ with ‘5–8’.
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196
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
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) Replaced both occurrences of ‘dug-out’ with ‘dugout’. Replaced ‘are marching’ with ‘is marching’.
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198
) Replaced ‘tunic, ‘what’ with ‘tunic. ‘What’. Replaced ‘gulleys’ with ‘gullies’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘lest it detects’ with ‘lest it detect’. Replaced ‘In the name of the Gods’ with ‘In the name of the gods’. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.
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200
) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
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201
) Replaced ‘Sir’ with ‘sir’.
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202
) Replaced ‘co-operation’ with ‘cooperation’. Replaced ‘3 arrows’ with ‘3 Arrows’. Replaced ‘a line of soldiers come’ with ‘a line of soldiers comes’. Replaced ‘half mile’ with ‘half-mile’. Replaced ‘smile, then’ with ‘smile, and then’.
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203
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘ultra-violet’ with ‘ultraviolet’. Replaced ‘Kai alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
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204
) Replaced ‘delight, ‘I’ with ‘delight. ‘I’. Replaced ‘Darklords War’ with ‘Darklands War’.
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206
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.
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207
) Replaced ‘spy-glass’ with ‘spyglass’.
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208
) Replaced ‘to your friend Banedon for providing you with’ with ‘for’ because Lone Wolf could have received the Platinum Amulet from Gwynian.
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209
) Replaced ‘town as well’ with ‘town’ because the reader may not have already encountered signs of the plague. Replaced ‘message: Abisko — 25 miles’ with ‘message ‘Abisko — 25 miles’ ’.
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210
) Replaced ‘Vaderish monastery’ with ‘Vaderish Monastery’. Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘monk's’ with ‘monks' ’. Replaced ‘son, then’ with ‘son, and then’. Replaced ‘River Phoen’ with ‘river’ because the River Phoen is actually many miles to the northeast of Garthen near the city of Phoena (cf.
The Jungle of Horrors
Section 271).
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211
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
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212
) Replaced ‘new order’ with ‘New Order’. Replaced ‘Abisko, turning to 3’ with ‘Abisko, by turning to 3’. Replaced ‘Narsha’ with ‘Nursha’. Replaced ‘words: Nursha Stables’ with ‘words ‘Nursha Stables’ ’.
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) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
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214
) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
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215
) Replaced ‘shouts, ‘Ride’ with ‘shouts. ‘Ride’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’.
(
216
) Replaced ‘pack launch’ with ‘pack launches’.
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217
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘tracks of quicksand’ with ‘tracts of quicksand’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
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218
) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘Sadly your’ with ‘Sadly, your’. Replaced ‘comes to’ with ‘come to’.
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) Replaced ‘plague-lords’ with ‘Plague Lords’.
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221
) Replaced ‘muscle, then’ with ‘muscle; then’.
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) Replaced ‘guildhouse’ with ‘guild-house’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
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223
) Replaced ‘rock face’ with ‘rock-face’. Replaced ‘hand hold’ with ‘handhold’.
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224
) Replaced ‘Sadly your’ with ‘Sadly, your’. Replaced ‘comes to’ with ‘come to’. Replaced ‘flight, then’ with ‘flight, and then’.
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226
) Replaced ‘shouts, ‘Ride’ with ‘shouts. ‘Ride’. Replaced ‘wound it’ with ‘wound, it’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’. Replaced ‘elation, then’ with ‘elation, and then’.
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227
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘fatique’ with ‘fatigue’.
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228
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
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230
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
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231
) Replaced ‘inkeeper’ with ‘innkeeper’. Replaced ‘kind Sir’ with ‘kind sir’.
(
232
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Sun Thane, or higher’ with ‘Sun Thane or higher’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
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233
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
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234
) Replaced ‘five Gold Crowns’ with ‘five Gold Crowns (or 20 Lune)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
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236
) Replaced ‘horsedrawn’ with ‘horse-drawn’. Replaced ‘weapons, money pouch, backpack,’ with ‘Weapons, Belt Pouch, Backpack,’. Replaced ‘Items however’ with ‘Items, however’. Replaced ‘taken)’ with ‘taken. These Eldenoran soldiers are especially superstitious and fearful of touching magical weapons and artefacts)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
237
) Replaced ‘ear, ‘you’ with ‘ear. ‘You’.
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238
) Replaced ‘graciously, ‘we’ with ‘graciously. ‘We’. Replaced ‘co-operation’ with ‘cooperation’. Replaced ‘Garthanians’ with ‘Garthenians’. Replaced ‘your majesty’ with ‘your Majesty’. Replaced ‘court cavalry’ with ‘Court Cavalry’.
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240
) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Quarlen, or’ with ‘Quarlen or’. Replaced ‘Ghosts, in’ with ‘Ghosts in’.
(
242
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘discard’ with ‘shoulder’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
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243
) Replaced ‘discard’ with ‘shoulder’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
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244
) Replaced ‘forest of Salony’ with ‘Forest of Salony’.
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245
) Replaced ‘new order’ with ‘New Order’. Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’.
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246
) Replaced ‘stammers, ‘I’ with ‘stammers. ‘I’. Replaced ‘uneasily, ‘I’ with ‘uneasily. ‘I’.
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247
) Replaced ‘every-decreasing’ with ‘ever-decreasing’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
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249
) Replaced ‘accent, ‘I’ with ‘accent. ‘I’.
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250
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of’ with ‘rank of Kai’. Replaced ‘new order’ with ‘New Order’. Replaced ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘battle banner’ with ‘battle-banner’ in both the section text and the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Kai-screen, and’ with ‘Kai-screen and’.
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252
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Royal chamber’ with ‘royal chamber’. Replaced ‘friends Banedon’ with ‘friends, Banedon’.
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253
) Replaced ‘glass and’ with ‘glass, and’. Added ‘If you possess a Jewelled Mace, you may add +3 to your
COMBAT SKILL
for the duration of this fight.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
254
) Replaced ‘dimly-lit’ with ‘dimly lit’.
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255
) Deleted ‘at the beginning of this book’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Eldenora, then’ with ‘Eldenora, and then’.
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256
) Replaced all occurrences of ‘the Monastery’ with ‘the monastery’. Replaced ‘Durncrag tower’ with ‘Durncrag Tower’. Replaced ‘Kai savant’ with ‘Kai Savant’. Replaced ‘Kai lords’ with ‘Kai Lords’. Replaced ‘north-west’ with ‘northwest’. Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’. Replaced ‘Hall, ‘the’ with ‘Hall. ‘The’. Replaced ‘door, ‘the’ with ‘door. ‘The’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘Raven's Eerie’ with ‘Raven's Eyrie’. Replaced ‘anniversary of the First Order’ with ‘anniversary of the massacre of the First Order’. Replaced ‘Gale’ with ‘Gate’. Replaced ‘sun-god Kai’ with ‘Sun-god Kai’. Replaced ‘cloud of winged Lavas are’ with ‘cloud of winged Lavas is’.
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257
) Replaced ‘feet-first’ with ‘head-first’.
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258
) Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘your life and the future of Sommerlund ends here’ with ‘your life and the future of Sommerlund end here’.
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259
) Replaced ‘Alright stranger’ with ‘Alright, stranger’. Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(
260
) Replaced ‘5 arrows’ with ‘5 Arrows’. Replaced ‘animal mastery’ with ‘Animal Mastery’. Replaced ‘North — Chod — 250 miles’ with ‘Chod: 250 miles North’. Replaced ‘West — Holona — 50 miles’ with ‘Holona: 50 miles West’. Replaced ‘South — Tenzha — 20 miles’ with ‘Tenzha: 20 miles South’.
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261
) Replaced ‘gas effects’ with ‘effects of the gas’. Replaced ‘Magnakai healing Disciplines’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline of Curing’. Replaced ‘chains, then’ with ‘chains, and then’.
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262
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
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263
) Replaced ‘shouts, ‘Ride’ with ‘shouts. ‘Ride’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’.
(
264
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(
265
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
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267
) Replaced ‘rigidity, then’ with ‘rigidity; then’.
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268
) Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’.
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269
) Replaced ‘(imposters)’ with ‘(impostors)’. Replaced ‘guardsmen’ with ‘Guardsmen’. Replaced ‘a yelling horde of bogus castle guardsmen come’ with ‘a yelling horde of bogus castle guardsmen comes’.
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270
) Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘Cener druid’ with ‘Cener Druid’. Replaced ‘panic-struck’ with ‘panic-stricken’.
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271
) Replaced ‘By the Gods’ with ‘By the gods’. Replaced ‘bridge, and the surrounding banks of the river, are’ with ‘bridge and the surrounding banks of the river are’.
(
272
) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Raven's Eerie’ with ‘Raven's Eyrie’.
(
273
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘(imposters)’ with ‘(impostors)’. Replaced ‘guardsmen’ with ‘Guardsmen’.
(
274
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘ultra-violet’ with ‘ultraviolet’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’.
(
275
) Replaced ‘camp fire’ with ‘campfire’. Replaced ‘lay awake’ with ‘lie awake’.
(
276
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘Kai alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.