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Authors: Joe Dever

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) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

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69
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘is now is’ with ‘is now’.

(
70
) Replaced ‘Conda’ with ‘conda’. Replaced ‘You draw upon your Kai mastery to command the snake to hold its attack’ with ‘You command the snake to hold its attack’ as you may have used the Eye of Lhaz to control the conda (see errata entry for
Section 130
for justification for this change).

(
72
) Replaced ‘Backpack Items List’ with ‘Action Chart’ since the Claw of Naar is a Special Item.

(
75
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
76
) Replaced ‘Poghram’ with ‘Poghlam’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.

(
78
) Replaced ‘three miles’ with ‘3 miles’.

(
80
) Replaced ‘money and’ with ‘money, and’. Replaced ‘following weapons’ with ‘following Weapons’. Replaced ‘tiger's head emblem’ with ‘tiger's-head emblem’.

(
81
) Replaced ‘Xanons’ with ‘Xanon’. Replaced ‘queuing’ with ‘queueing’.

(
82
) Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’.

(
83
) Replaced ‘loathe to’ with ‘loath to’.

(
85
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
86
) Replaced ‘come a squad’ with ‘comes a squad’. Replaced ‘Special Item’ with ‘Backpack Item’ as the Red Key is a Backpack Item (cf.
Section 76
).

(
87
) Replaced ‘talisman’ with ‘Gold Talisman’.

(
88
) Replaced ‘shield spell’ with ‘
Shield
spell’.

(
89
) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’.

(
90
) Replaced ‘consumate’ with ‘consummate’.

(
91
) Replaced ‘plains' grass’ with ‘plains grass’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘five miles’ with ‘5 miles’.

(
92
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘is now is’ with ‘is now’.

(
94
) Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.

(
95
) Replaced ‘hoods, then’ with ‘hoods; then’.

(
99
) Replaced ‘Kai powers’ with ‘Magnakai powers’.

(
102
) Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’.

(
103
) Deleted ‘which you carry in your pack’.

(
104
) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’. Replaced ‘tower, then’ with ‘tower, and then’.

(
107
) Replaced ‘93 or higher’ with ‘9 or higher’.

(
108
) Replaced ‘Magnakai curing’ with ‘Magnakai Curing’.

(
110
) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’.

(
112
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘tiger's head emblem’ with ‘tiger's-head emblem’.

(
115
) Replaced ‘rank of Kai Sun Lord’ with ‘rank of Sun Lord’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.

(
116
) Replaced ‘take hold the’ with ‘take hold of the’.

(
117
) Replaced ‘menacingly quiet’ with ‘quiet, menacing’.

(
118
) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’.

(
119
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘mound of rocks that now block’ with ‘mound of rocks that now blocks’.

(
120
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
122
) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘
list of Special Items
’.

(
124
) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
128
) Replaced ‘claim back’ with ‘reclaim’. Added a paragraph break between ‘asks, reproachfully.’ and ‘ ‘No, Captain’.

(
130
) Replaced ‘woodsmoke’ with ‘wood smoke’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘Grey Conda’ with ‘grey conda’ in both the text and the Illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Animal Mastery’ with ‘Animal Mastery or the Eye of Lhaz’ since
The Buccaneers of Shadaki
Section 167 states that the Eye of Lhaz ‘enables user to exert control over poisonous snakes’.

(
131
) Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘the figure’ with ‘the number of Arrows lost’.

(
133
) Replaced ‘Crowns, to’ with ‘Crowns to’.

(
134
) Replaced ‘queuing’ with ‘queueing’. Replaced ‘storerooms’ with ‘store rooms’. Replaced ‘hidden, then’ with ‘hidden, and then’.

(
135
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
136
) Replaced ‘well-appointed’ with ‘well appointed’. Replaced ‘tiger's head shrine’ with ‘tiger's-head shrine’.

(
137
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘to the’ with ‘to twice the’ in the puzzle. Replaced ‘Gildas's command’ with ‘Gildas' command’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘Northern Gulf’ with ‘northern gulf’.

(
139
) Replaced ‘sword-belt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘Gildas's lead’ with ‘Gildas' lead’.

(
142
) Replaced ‘side-steps’ with ‘sidesteps’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’.

(
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) Replaced ‘birds who’ with ‘birds that’.

(
146
) Replaced ‘Main Square’ with ‘main square’.

(
149
) Replaced ‘greets your’ with ‘greet your’.

(
151
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
153
) Replaced ‘bardsmanship’ with ‘Bardsmanship’.

(
154
) Added a period after ‘turn to 266’, ‘turn to 135’, ‘turn to 51’, and ‘turn to 230’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

(
158
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
159
) Replaced ‘Ren, but’ with ‘Ren but’. Replaced ‘rider, that's’ with ‘rider; that's’.

(
161
) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’. Replaced ‘Conda's’ with ‘conda's’.

(
165
) Replaced ‘foot, then’ with ‘foot; then’.

(
166
) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’. Replaced ‘the key’ with ‘the Red Key’. Replaced ‘inside, then’ with ‘inside, and then’. Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.

(
167
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.

(
171
) Replaced ‘Kai curing’ with ‘Magnakai Curing’.

(
172
) Replaced ‘on-rushing’ with ‘onrushing’. Replaced ‘continue, to 18’ with ‘continue, turn to 18’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘head over tail’ with ‘head-over-tail’.

(
173
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
174
) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘military quarter’ with ‘Military Quarter’. Replaced ‘compass, and your Kai sixth sense, both’ with ‘Siyenese Compass and your Kai Sixth Sense both’.

(
175
) Replaced ‘potion’ with ‘Poghlam’. Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.

(
176
) Removed quotation marks from thought-speech. Replaced ‘patience and your effort is soon’ with ‘patience and your effort are soon’.

(
177
) Replaced ‘through, then’ with ‘through, and then’.

(
178
) Replaced ‘armour, then’ with ‘armour, and then’.

(
181
) Replaced ‘much-favoured’ with ‘much favoured’.

(
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) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
183
) Replaced ‘five miles’ with ‘5 miles’.

(
185
) Replaced ‘shield spell’ with ‘
Shield
spell’.

(
186
) Replaced ‘have found who they’ with ‘have found whom they’.

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) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.

(
188
) Replaced ‘Kai curing’ with ‘Magnakai Curing’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘stikes’ with ‘strikes’. Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘
bang
’.

(
195
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.

(
198
) Replaced ‘side-steps’ with ‘sidesteps’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’.

(
199
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘continue, to 18’ with ‘continue, turn to 18’. Replaced ‘the creature's head’ with ‘the closest creature's head’ since the specific target had not yet been stated.

(
200
) Replaced ‘much-practiced’ with ‘much practiced’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
201
) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’.

(
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) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.

(
204
) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’.

(
206
) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Khea Khan’ with ‘Khea-khan’. Replaced ‘tiger's head flag’ with ‘tiger's-head flag’.

(
207
) Replaced ‘Ring, and’ with ‘Ring and’.

(
210
) Replaced ‘Conda's’ with ‘conda's’.

(
212
) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’.

(
214
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.

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215
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
217
) Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’.

(
218
) Replaced ‘gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’.

(
219
) Replaced ‘they enter’ with ‘they will enter’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Swapped the links to Sections
300
and
254
so that the Random Number inflicts less damage on the player with the higher resultant value. Replaced ‘pushing it forward’ with ‘pushing it forwards’.

(
220
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’.

(
221
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘
Whoomph!
,’ with ‘
Whoomph!
’. Replaced ‘bow, then’ with ‘Bow, and then’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.

(
222
) Replaced ‘armour, then’ with ‘armour, and then’.

(
223
) Replaced ‘skills, or if you choose not to use them, or a Bow’ with ‘skills, nor a Bow, or if you choose not to use them’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
225
) Replaced ‘distant ravine, ‘that gully’ with ‘distant ravine. ‘That gully’. Added a paragraph break before ‘Rimoah nods in reply’.

(
227
) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’. Replaced ‘creaks opens’ with ‘creaks open’.

(
228
) Deleted ‘which you carry in your pack’.

(
230
) Deleted ‘If you possess the Kai Weapon “Magnara”, add 3.’ as it is impossible to arrive in this section if you possess this particular Kai Weapon (cf.
Section 106
and subsequent sections).

(
233
) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.

(
235
) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’. Replaced ‘mindblast’ with ‘Mindblast’.

(
237
) Replaced ‘lookout, then’ with ‘lookout; then’.

(
239
) Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

(
240
) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘a corridor of weather-worn pillars line’ with ‘a corridor of weather-worn pillars lines’. Replaced ‘Sentinel, or higher’ with ‘Sentinel or higher’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.

(
241
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
242
) Replaced ‘Xanons’ with ‘Xanon’. Replaced ‘queuing’ with ‘queueing’.

(
243
) Removed paragraph break between ‘
Random Number Table
.’ and ‘If you possess’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.

(
245
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.

(
246
) Replaced ‘pack, then’ with ‘pack; then’.

(
247
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.

(
248
) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘
list of Special Items
’.

(
249
) Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass, and then’.

(
250
) Replaced ‘plains' grass’ with ‘plains grass’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘five miles’ with ‘5 miles’.

(
251
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘silence, then’ with ‘silence; then’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘mound of rocks that now block’ with ‘mound of rocks that now blocks’.

(
252
) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.

(
253
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘All four of your arrows find their mark’ with ‘Each of your four Arrows finds its mark’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.

(
256
) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘military quarter’ with ‘Military Quarter’. Replaced ‘compass, and your Kai sixth sense, both’ with ‘Siyenese Compass and your Kai Sixth Sense both’. Replaced ‘dimly-lit’ with ‘dimly lit’.

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