The Legacy of Vashna (30 page)

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188
) Replaced ‘quivers and’ with ‘quivers, and’.

(
189
) Replaced ‘In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.’ with ‘I possess two Dwellers of the Abyss. My loyal servants are equal in number to the months in a Magnamund year, less the number of my Dwellers of the Abyss.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Deleted ‘ ‘In addition to the loyal servants, there are two Dwellers of the Abyss.’ ’.

(
190
) Replaced ‘cloak and’ with ‘cloak, and’.

(
193
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
194
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘mouth, then’ with ‘mouth; then’. Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass; then’.

(
195
) Replaced ‘eyes, ‘let’ with ‘eyes. ‘Let’.

(
197
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
198
) Replaced ‘bow and draw an arrow’ with ‘Bow and draw an Arrow’. Replaced ‘jaw’ with ‘jaws’.

(
200
) Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘acolyte Elders’ with ‘Acolyte Elders’. Replaced ‘face it you see, two’ with ‘face it, you see two’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘these, or’ with ‘these or’.

(
202
) Replaced ‘salute, then’ with ‘salute, and then’.

(
203
) Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’.

(
204
) Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’.

(
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) Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord’ since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
207
) Replaced ‘Huntmastery you’ with ‘Huntmastery, you’.

(
208
) Replaced ‘scavenger’ with ‘Scavenger’. Replaced ‘most-favoured’ with ‘most favoured’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘Jackals’ with ‘Jackals’. Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’. Replaced ‘Sun Knight, or higher’ with ‘Sun Knight or higher’.

(
209
) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘animal kinship’ with ‘Animal Kinship’. Replaced ‘so you’ with ‘so, you’.

(
211
) Replaced ‘gone, then’ with ‘gone; then’.

(
212
) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’.

(
213
) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘laughs sneeringly’ with ‘laughs, sneering’.

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214
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

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218
) Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’.

(
221
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘human, she’ with ‘human; she’.

(
222
) Replaced ‘to the gallop’ with ‘to a gallop’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘jackals’ with ‘Jackals’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
223
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’.

(
224
) Replaced ‘throng who are kneeling’ with ‘throng kneeling’.

(
225
) Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.

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226
) Replaced ‘furrier's shop’ with ‘furriers' shop’. Replaced ‘mitts’ with ‘Mitts’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘cloaks’ with ‘Cloaks’. Replaced ‘corvayl’ with ‘Corvayl’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘pelts’ in the sale list with ‘Pelts’. Replaced ‘White wolf’ with ‘White Wolf’. Replaced ‘hides’ with ‘Hides’. Replaced ‘furs, or’ with ‘furs or’.

(
227
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘man, clad in furs clutching’ with ‘man clad in furs and clutching’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.

(
228
) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘maniacally, ‘You’ with ‘maniacally. ‘You’.

(
229
) Replaced ‘Your Kai blast’ with ‘Your devastating blast’. Replaced ‘weakened by Kai blast’ with ‘weakened by psychic attack’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘add 5 to your
ENDURANCE
points score’ with ‘restore 5 points to your
ENDURANCE
score’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
230
) Replaced ‘horseshoe circle’ with ‘horseshoe shape’. Replaced ‘wintery’ with ‘wintry’. Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’.

(
231
) Replaced ‘eagle eyes’ with ‘eagle-eyes’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
232
) Replaced ‘cloud of crypt spawn’ with ‘cloud of Crypt Spawn’. Replaced ‘Crypt spawn’ with ‘Crypt Spawn’.

(
233
) Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’.

(
234
) Replaced ‘After a short while he says.’ with ‘After a short while he says,’. Moved that phrase into the beginning of the fourth paragraph rather than at the end of the third. Replaced three occurrences of ‘amulet’ with ‘Amulet’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’.

(
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) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.

(
236
) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.

(
237
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
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) Replaced ‘Storn, a few’ with ‘Storn a few’.

(
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) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘maniacally, ‘You’ with ‘maniacally. ‘You’.

(
241
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘longer ,’ with ‘longer,’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Mind Charm’.

(
243
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.

(
244
) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.

(
246
) Replaced ‘abate, then’ with ‘abate; then’. Replaced ‘Sun Knight, add’ with ‘Sun Knight or higher, add’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and have’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and have’.

(
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) Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’.

(
249
) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.

(
250
) Replaced ‘Then, as you round a knoll of rock, shaped’ with ‘Then as you round a knoll of rock shaped’. Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced ‘sky, then’ with ‘sky; then’. Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’. Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’.

(
251
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘plank, then’ with ‘plank, and then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘fifteen metres’ with ‘fifty feet’.

(
252
) Removed the quotation marks around ‘Be brave, Grand Master. But most of all — be swift!’.

(
253
) Replaced ‘branch, then’ with ‘branch; then’.

(
254
) Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘approaching.’ with ‘approaching from.’. Replaced ‘domain, a’ with ‘domain: a’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.

(
255
) Replaced ‘runic disc’ with ‘Runic Disc’.

(
256
) Replaced ‘north-easterly’ with ‘northeasterly’.

(
257
) Replaced ‘Black corvayl’ with ‘Black Corvayl’.

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) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
261
) Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.

(
263
) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.

(
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) Replaced ‘psi-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.

(
265
) Replaced ‘acolyte Elder’ with ‘Acolyte Elder’.

(
267
) Replaced ‘offguard’ with ‘off-guard’. Added ‘Arch Druid Cadak is immune to Mindblast and Psi-surge, but he is vulnerable to Kai-surge.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
268
) Replaced ‘Vakovarian brigands’ with ‘Vakovarian Brigands’. Replaced ‘rounds, by’ with ‘rounds by’.

(
269
) Replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’. Removed the quotation marks around ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘be — a lowly acolyte of Vashna’ with ‘be: a lowly Acolyte of Vashna’.

(
272
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.

(
274
) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.

(
275
) Replaced ‘acolyte Elder’ with ‘Acolyte Elder’. Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’. Replaced ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’.

(
276
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun Knight, or higher’ with ‘Sun Knight or higher’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.

(
277
) Replaced ‘humble-but-honest’ with ‘humble but honest’. Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’.

(
278
) Replaced ‘sparks, then’ with ‘sparks; then’. Replaced ‘arching’ with ‘arcing’.

(
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) Replaced ‘streaming’ with ‘steaming’. Replaced ‘six metres’ with ‘twenty feet’.

(
280
) Replaced ‘three metres’ with ‘ten feet’.

(
283
) Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord’ since Sun Lord is the highest available rank in this book. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.

(
284
) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.

(
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) Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’.

(
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) Replaced ‘chasm of doom’ with ‘Chasm of Doom’. Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘say, ‘how’ with ‘say. ‘How’.

(
287
) Replaced ‘gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’. Replaced ‘lop-sided’ with ‘lopsided’.

(
288
) Replaced ‘Elder-magi’ with ‘Elder Magi’.

(
290
) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’.

(
293
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘Backpack (up to a maximum of 2 Meals).’ with ‘Backpack. (You may take up to a maximum of 2 Meals. These nutritious blossoms have no healing properties.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.

(
294
) Replaced ‘spell’ with ‘Spell’. Removed the quotation marks from ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘eyes, then’ with ‘eyes; then’.

(
295
) Replaced ‘throng who are kneeling’ with ‘throng kneeling’.

(
296
) Replaced ‘ever-nearer’ with ‘ever nearer’.

(
297
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘out, ‘my’ with ‘out. ‘My’. Replaced ‘Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’.

(
298
) Replaced ‘curse, then’ with ‘curse; then’.

(
300
) Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’.

(
301
) Replaced ‘bow, draw an arrow from your quiver’ with ‘Bow, draw an Arrow from your Quiver’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.

(
302
) Replaced ‘Kai pathsmanship’ with ‘Magnakai Pathsmanship’.

(
304
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Thok!’ with ‘thok!’. Replaced ‘screams, and’ with ‘screams and’. Replaced ‘lips, then’ with ‘lips; then’.

(
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) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’.

(
306
) Replaced ‘corvayl’ with ‘Corvayl’.

(
307
) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘north-easterly’ with ‘northeasterly’.

(
308
) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.

(
309
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘jackals’ with ‘Jackals’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’. Replaced ‘Discipline, or’ with ‘Discipline or’.

(
311
) Replaced ‘arching’ with ‘arcing’. Replaced ‘brightly, then’ with ‘brightly; then’.

(
314
) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.

(
315
) Replaced ‘king's’ with ‘King's’. Replaced ‘warmly, ‘it’ with ‘warmly. ‘It’.

(
316
) Replaced ‘token’ with ‘Token’. Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘
bang
’.

(
318
) Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘shadow gate’ with ‘Shadow Gate’.

(
319
) Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian’. Replaced ‘this rank of’ with ‘this level of’. Replaced ‘Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.

(
320
) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun Knight’ with ‘Sun Knight or higher’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.

(
322
) Replaced ‘acolyte Elder’ with ‘Acolyte Elder’.

(
323
) Moved ‘How can I help you, stranger?’ to the first paragraph and moved ‘For an instant the look of suspicion returns to his beady eyes, then he sneers and says,’ to the third paragraph. Replaced ‘eyes, then’ with ‘eyes; then’.

(
324
) Replaced ‘vortexi’ with ‘Vortexi’. Replaced ‘sparks, then’ with ‘sparks; then’.

(
325
) Replaced ‘acolytes of Vashna’ with ‘Acolytes of Vashna’. Replaced ‘ruins, by’ with ‘ruins by’.

(
326
) Replaced ‘Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen, and’ with ‘Kai-screen and’.

(
327
) Replaced ‘stalagtites’ with ‘stalactites’. Replaced ‘young teenage’ with ‘young, teenage’. Replaced ‘chasm of doom’ with ‘Chasm of Doom’. Replaced ‘seven metres’ with ‘twenty feet’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.

(
328
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.

(
329
) Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.

(
330
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘If, after’ with ‘If after’.

(
333
) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’ as per Joe Dever's original manuscript.