David J. Schow
The Kill Riff
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JUSTICE
Lucas Ellington's daughter is dead, trampled by an out-of-control mob at a rock concert turned riot. There was no trial, but Lucas has identified the murderers - the band, Whip Hand.
VENGEANCE
Two of Gabriel Stannard's old bandmates are dead. Whip Hand's former lead singer knows who killed them. Stannard will not be a passive target.
MADNESS
Rock and roll forever… until death.
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From Publishers Weekly
Having written a number of short stories in the horror field, Schow has now produced his first novel, an unfocused and overlong but not totally unsuccessful thriller about madness and revenge, with no supernatural element. The narrative concerns Lucas Ellington, whose daughter was trampled to death at a rock concert. Ellington has committed himself to exterminating the members of Whip Hand, the rock group whose performance incited the audience to stampede. At first a sympathetic character, Ellington becomes gradually less soand less believable as we come to see him as an insane but cunning wild animal. The other characters are mostly cyphers, except for Gabriel Stannard, Whip Hand's lead singer, an insecure pretty boy who masquerades as an urban guerrilla, complete with large arsenal and killer friends. Both the pace and style are uneven, and the plot is fairly predictable, but there are one or two surprises that, gratifyingly, work well. Schow demonstrates that he has the raw material to produce a really good thriller, although this one isn't it.
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From Library Journal
Readers of this first novel will understand why Schow wins awards for his horror stories. Lucas Ellington seeks to avenge his daughter's death at a rock concert by destroying band members one by one. The last one left alive is forced to live up to a macho image by stalking his stalker in return. Lucas is a sympathetic character at first, but increasingly his craziness is revealed. This novel deals with the dark side of rock music and media exploitation but, in a larger sense, it explores what revenge does to the avenger. Graphic sex, violence, and vulgarity may turn some readers off, but this is otherwise strongly recommended for horror collections.
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'A clobbering good read.'
- The Times
'Schow's rock music atmosphere is real and compelling, his characters finely crafted, and he writes with a lethal beauty.
THE KILL RIFF
is a real headknocker!'
- Robert R. McCammon
'
THE KILL RIFF
would make a fine Roman Polanski movie in the manner of Hitchcock.'
- The Philadelphia Inquirer
'A gargantuan feast of fright!'
- Robert Bloch, author of
PSYCHO
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To wine in your glass
The song in your eyes
And a dance in your garden
for
PEGGY
with love
AUTHOR'S NOTE
The stuff that happens in
The Kill Riff
is made up. It is NOT REAL. The people are not real people. This is what is meant when you read "any resemblance to real people or incidents is purely coincidental." If you claim this book has made you do weird things, you should be locked away where you cannot hurt anyone. Repeat: I made it all up. That's why it's called fiction.
- DJS
1
THIS TIME HE WOULD PULL the trigger without blinking.
Training permitted him to lock his eyes open so he could watch the face in the crosshairs. As it imploded, blood would flush, brains would splatter wetly backward, two ice-blue eyes would fly violently away from each other. And the equity most people ascribed to an indifferent universe would be demonstrated. Balance would be restored.
That was how it should have gone.
Kristen's eyes are glittering.
He was sliding into the nightmare again, reliving her death for the thousandth time. His slumbering mind acknowledged that the recurrent dream was purely a product of his brain, neural impulses with nothing to do but spin their wheels, rewing aimlessly, juxtaposing bits of data-always the same information, endlessly repeated.
His hair is white blond, floating dreamily.
The dreamer's knowledge that this was a dream did nothing to dispel or dilute it; he was transfixed, a tiny desert animal trapped and hypnotized by the nova glow of oncoming headlights. There was nothing anyone could do about what was going to happen… except live through the whole terrible sequence one more time.
Encore: one more time!
Behind closed lids, the rapid eye movements characteristic of the dream state tracked avidly along to follow the actions in the sleeper's mind.
Kristen's eyes are glittering. It's encore time.
He had not been there. The expression on his daughter's face was what his brain deemed correct for the circumstance. Reflected in her upward gaze were equal parts awe, joy, apprehension, confusion… and yes, let's admit it now, shall we? A taste of lust. Or what passed for lust, in the sixteen-year-old hive mind. She was surrounded by acolytes experiencing the same emotions, swaying as one with the group. Her peers, the sleeper supposed. All their lust was directed at the man on the stage, the one with the power over them. The aggregate desire was as sheer and clean and blameless as honed steel.
His perfect mane of white-blond hair floating dreamily, the man onstage exhorts his congregation, teasing and beckoning. He makes a flailing, wildman leap and lands precisely on one knee, triceps jumping boldly as he brandishes his cordless radio microphone. It is scepterlike, of gleaming chrome. Sweat has popped forth to decorate his face in animal dots. His pupils are tiny, stopped down and aimed like sniper sights. He genuflects to his people. And they gobble it up. It is a spectacle in the true Roman sense, an onslaught of macho posturing, tribal rhythms and down dirty sexual amplitude, motive energy to spot-weld the musicians into their role as the ultimate Party Band.
Upstage, subordinately placed, the men with the instruments contort through a repertoire of the expected poses, forcing sounds out of their equipment as though in intense pain, white-knuckled, grimacing, all dead black leather and cinder-block chords in four-four time, pushing and reshaping enormous masses of air within the bowl of the arena-sculpting the very atmosphere so that the thump of the bass guitar is a physical thing that punches the diaphragm, and flesh is electrified by the tingle of the guitar solo, keening and soaring.
The percussionist is invisible behind his barricade of drums. His tom-tom lies face flat so that when he strikes it, his accumulated sweat flies up from the taut plastic in a spray. He is battling his drum kit, pummeling his sticks to shards, snatching up replacements without missing a strike, tossing the dead sticks into the imploring, grasping hands of the audience. Fistfights erupt over possession of the blessed splinters, pieces of the true cross of heavy metal. The fights flare and die like the flame of a sulfur match. The pieces are tasted by the crowd, digested, and found to be good. Hands in fingerless gloves and studded wristbands are clenched and raised. Finger symbols entreat the next offering.
Kristen glances to her left as a doubled fist lands hard on a kid's head. The impact drops his jaw. His eyes vanish into shock wrinkles; his lank yellow hair jerks upward as he is sucked under. The chunk of drumstick wrested from his grasp is held high. Kristen thinks of Neanderthals pounding each other over stinking tidbits from some halfcharred prehistoric bird-
hey, I want the drumstick, brontosaurus breath!
Once again she has the fleeting thought that perhaps she is getting too old for the concert scene. Too often, she winds up next to hippie flotsam whose last bath was at Woodstock or gets vomited on by some thirteen-year-old who ate too many Quaaludes with his Cheerios that morning. She hates festival seating. Open arena floor, no seats, also called "dance concert" seating, seating that isn't seating at all. How fucking stupid. No room to breathe, let alone dance. As the music and crowd fervor intensify, so does the elbow room vanish. But she is a veteran at these things by now. She can handle not seeing a restroom for the duration of a four-hour, three-act show. From where she stands she can reach forward and touch the wooden security barricade, just two yards distant from the heroes onstage. That is her compensation. Shoulder to shoulder with the die-hard fans, she dismisses the fight (too gross to bother with) and keeps her attention on the show. Enraptured, she watches.
Too old at sixteen
-now there's a giggle…
The show is so pat that it could offend nobody but a fundamentalist. Bad boys doing the reform school strut, grunting primal lyrics, cranking out the moves as smoothly as millionaire bikers with platinum drive chains. It is harmlessly evil showbiz, a high-volume urban diversion, audience pleasing, good box office. The sleeper knew this. He liked rock, good and loud, an aural assault that could cleanse away tensions and allow you to boogie off the dead ass that came from sitting and working for hours. The music was blameless.
But the crescendo was coming. His body knew it and did not bother arguing with his brain.
The rollicking gusher of music vibrates through their bones and prompts frantic clapping, in cadence. A hand slides up between Kristen's legs from behind, squeezes, and is gone. The usual crap. She doesn't even bother to turn around. She is submerged, getting off on the sheer sound. And then-
Whores in Saigon. They did not care what you filled your hand with, as long as you had American money.
And then he looks directly at her, all shimmering white-blond curls and hooded adder eyes, the icepick stab of a come-hither glance, his glowing ice-blue irises locking on to her brown-green ones. She feels heat at her temples, a surging at her groin.
Yum.
She imagines his hand filling up with her. The masses feel her up with their closeness, their lemminglike forward momentum. Though she no longer sees them, she is pulled along by their riptide. Her eyes are captured. Green spikes of color in them flare and become prominent, as they do whenever she is excited or happy. Her feet shuffle forward. One step. One more. Two rows of crushed-together people, two thicknesses of human corpus, separate her from the plywood barricade.
He thought of taking those damnable nameless hills at night, a foot at a time. Six hours of fighting to gain a few yards of distance. Toting up the yardage in the gallons of blood you used to buy it. It was never worth it. The flame pots a lot of bands now used in their concert shows shot up columns of fire, like plumes of napalm. One such had fried off Michael Jackson's hair during the filming of a Pepsi commercial. A trench of gasoline could do a hell of a job.
God,
she thinks,
he must work out two hours every day, just like Doc Savage.
He peels off his sequined gold vest to bare a professionally conditioned physique that is granite hard and as flowingly smooth as dry ice. She watches his pecs pump as he wheels the winking vest around and around overhead, lasso style. The crowd is more vocal now, the herd pressure escalating, a banzai charge in slow motion.
I think he's going to throw it. Oh, god. He's going to throw it at me.
She has never had a rock star look at her before.
Oh, my god…
Rock god. Like the toadish, squatting stone idols in the jungle. Abandoned, forgotten gods, who evaporate for lack of followers. Gods need sacrifices. They rather insist on them. Gods always do. They are immovable in that respect. Like rocks.
Sinews snap into tight relief as the vest is hooked into a flat spin. Kristen's eyes do not follow it. The crowd breaks with fearsome suddenness, a tidal wave hitting a sand castle.
Despite the floodtide of articles in psychological journals, there is no simple sociological explanation for why such things happen. There is no pinpointed cause for the effect beyond presumed catalysts for the hive mind. These things happen spontaneously. Sometimes fires start the same way.