Read The Captives of Kaag Online
Authors: Joe Dever
Tags: #Fiction, #Fantasy, #Lone Wolf, #Magnamund
We have taken our unique opportunity to correct errors and to enforce a standard of English usage. We list our changes here. If you see anything that needs correction, please
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the Project Aon Staff.
(
Blurb
) Replaced ‘
THE CAPTIVES OF KAAG
’ with ‘
The Captives of Kaag
’.
(
Dedication
) Replaced ‘Jeannie and’ with ‘Jeannie, and’.
(
The Story So Far …
) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘freestate’ with ‘Freeland’. Replaced ‘re-birth’ with ‘rebirth’. Replaced ‘monastery of the Kai’ with ‘Monastery of the Kai’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Replaced ‘north-east’ with ‘northeast’. Replaced ‘Gournen and’ with ‘Gournen, and’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced ‘comprised’ with ‘were part of’.
(
The Game Rules
) Replaced ‘13-onwards’ with ‘Book 13 onwards’. Replaced ‘fall to zero’ with ‘fall to zero or below’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘ie’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Grand Master’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Grand Master
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘
Lone Wolf
Grand Master’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Grand Master
’. Replaced ‘Chart (you’ with ‘Chart. (You’. Replaced ‘Items).’ with ‘Items.)’. Added ‘Silver Bracers’ and ‘Korlinium Scabbard’ to the list of items permitted to be brought over from the
Lone Wolf Kai
and
Lone Wolf Magnakai
books in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
Grand Master Disciplines
) Replaced ‘gods’ with ‘Gods’. Replaced ‘gases, corrosive’ with ‘gases, and corrosive’. Replaced ‘When you enter combat with one of your Grand Master weapons, you add 5 points to your
COMBAT SKILL
. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the Grand Master series, means you are skilled in
two
of the weapons listed below.’ with ‘When you enter combat with one of your Grand Weaponmastery weapons, you add 5 points to your
COMBAT SKILL
. The rank of Kai Grand Defender, with which you begin the
Lone Wolf Grand Master
series, means you are supremely efficient in the use of two of the weapons listed below. For each book that you complete in the
Lone Wolf Grand Master
series (Books 13–20), you will gain mastery of an additional weapon. For example, if you complete
The Plague Lords of Ruel
and have the Grand Master Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery at the beginning of the next
Lone Wolf Grand Master
book, you may choose an additional Weapon to gain mastery of.’ in harmony with the Collector's Editions. Replaced ‘
COMBAT SKILL
is reduced to 8 points or less’ with ‘
ENDURANCE
is reduced to 8 points or less’ as clarified in
Lone Wolf Club Newsletter No.24
. Replaced ‘battle magic’ with ‘battle-magic’. Replaced ‘venoms and’ with ‘venoms, and’. Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘fortresses increases’ with ‘fortresses increase’. Replaced ‘body, increases’ with ‘body, increase’. Added ‘These skills include the basic use of Old Kingdom Spells such as
Shield
,
Power Word
, and
Invisible Fist
.’ as found in the Magi-magic section in Books 19 and 20. Added ‘These spells include
Lightning Hand
,
Levitation
, and
Mind Charm
.’ as found in the Kai-alchemy section in Books 19 and 20. Replaced ‘smell and’ with ‘smell, and’. Added ‘ If you have chosen the Discipline of Grand Huntmastery as one of your skills, you will not need to tick off a Meal when instructed to eat.’ to the section on Grand Huntmastery. Replaced each occurrence of ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’. Added Brian Williams' Grand Master Disciplines illustrations from later books. Replaced ‘will be of use’ with ‘may be of use’. Added ‘If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 5 to any number that you pick from the
Random Number Table
, when using the Bow.’ from the
Equipment
section. Replaced ‘Kai and Magnakai Disciplines’ with ‘Kai & Magnakai Disciplines’ for consistency with later books. Replaced ‘
Lone Wolf
Grand Master’ with ‘
Lone Wolf Grand Master
’. Replaced ‘the next Grand Master adventure’ with ‘the next
Lone Wolf Grand Master
adventure’. Replaced ‘darkness, and have’ with ‘darkness and have’. Replaced ‘plants, and have’ with ‘plants and have’. Replaced ‘Duration, and the protection of his inanimate body, increase’ with ‘Duration and the protection of his inanimate body increase’.
(
Equipment
) Removed ‘(see the inside front cover of this book)’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘arrow’ or ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrow’. Amended the text to correctly reflect the +5
COMBAT SKILL
bonus for Grand Weaponmastery. Replaced both occurrences of ‘safe-keeping’ with ‘safekeeping’. Replaced ‘eg,’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced all occurrences of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘combat, therefore’ with ‘combat; therefore’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow’ with ‘Grand Weaponmastery with Bow’. Replaced ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced ‘a sword or an axe’ with ‘a Sword or an Axe’. Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’. Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’. Deleted ‘If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 to any number that you pick from the
Random Number Table
, when using the Bow.’. Replaced ‘record these on your
Weapons List
’ with ‘record these on your
Action Chart
’ for clarity. Added ‘You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(
Rules for Combat
) Removed ‘on the inside back cover of this book’. Replaced ‘reduced to zero’ with ‘reduced to zero or below’. Replaced ‘on the page after the
Random Number Table
’ with ‘in the back of this book’. In the example combat, changed Lone Wolf's initial
COMBAT SKILL
to 27 and corrected the Kai-surge bonus to +8
COMBAT SKILL
. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead.’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead.’.
(
Levels of Grand Mastership
) Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’.
(
Improved Grand Master Disciplines
) Replaced ‘etc,’ with ‘etc.,’. Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘Magi-Magic’ with ‘Magi-magic’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘
Lone Wolf
’ when referring to the series.
(
Grand Master's Wisdom
) Replaced ‘Choose your four Grand’ with ‘Choose your Grand’.
(
1
) Replaced ‘Bo'sun’ with ‘bo'sun’. Replaced ‘look-outs’ with ‘lookouts’. Replaced ‘Fryelund forest’ with ‘Fryelund Forest’. Replaced ‘north-east’ with ‘northeast’. Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’. Replaced ‘Banedon, then’ with ‘Banedon, and then’. Replaced ‘Kai monastery’ with ‘Kai Monastery’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.
(
3
) Replaced ‘click’ with ‘
click
’.
(
5
) Replaced ‘veterans’ with ‘Veterans’.
(
6
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(
9
) Replaced ‘safety. After’ with ‘safety, yet your submersion has cost you your money pouch and one item from your Backpack, lost when you first fell into the dusty pool. Erase all your Gold Crowns, and the first item recorded on your Backpack Items list. After’ (cf. Sections
165
and
342
).
(
10
) Replaced ‘head first’ with ‘head-first’. Replaced ‘commotion, and your presence, has’ with ‘commotion — and your presence — has’. Replaced ‘Drakkar guard’ with ‘Drakkarim guard’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
11
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(
12
) Replaced ‘the Sword of Helshezag’ with ‘Helshezag’.
(
13
) Deleted ‘ which you keep in your Backpack’ to avoid confusion.
(
15
) Replaced ‘Banedon, then’ with ‘Banedon; then’.
(
17
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(
18
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘
‘Detect Evil’
’ with ‘
Sense Evil
’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Discipline, or’ with ‘Discipline or’.
(
19
) Replaced ‘ ‘Okak dan-ish! Ok der kog!’ ’ with ‘
‘Okak dan-ish! Ok der kog!’
’.
(
23
) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(
25
) Replaced ‘Drakkar guard’ with ‘Drakkarim guard’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
29
) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(
31
) Replaced ‘tack and’ with ‘tack, and’.
(
32
) Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’.
(
34
) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(
35
) Replaced ‘potholes’ with ‘pot-holes’.
(
36
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and have’ with ‘Huntmastery and have’.
(
37
) Replaced ‘statuette’ with ‘Statuette’. Deleted ‘ which you keep in your Backpack’ to avoid confusion. Replaced ‘jewel encrusted bones and’ with ‘jewel-encrusted bones, and’ in the illustration's caption.
(
38
) Replaced ‘torch-lit’ with ‘torchlit’. Replaced ‘not over, it’ with ‘not over; it’. Replaced ‘mechanism, then’ with ‘mechanism, and then’. Replaced ‘tells you’ with ‘tell you’.
(
42
) Removed the quotation marks from the quotation of Banedon's speech in favour of italicizing the text.
(
43
) Replaced ‘pin-point’ with ‘pinpoint’. Replaced ‘dead end, then’ with ‘dead end; then’.
(
44
) Replaced ‘not over, it’ with ‘not over; it’. Replaced ‘tells you’ with ‘tell you’.
(
46
) Replaced both occurrences of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘snarling defiantly, then’ with ‘snarling defiantly; then’.
(
50
) Replaced ‘ice dragon’ with ‘Ice Dragon’. Replaced ‘of glass, then’ with ‘of glass; then’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(
51
) Replaced ‘not over, it’ with ‘not over; it’.
(
52
) Replaced ‘white light, then’ with ‘white light; then’.
(
54
) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.
(
55
) Replaced ‘stalagtites’ with ‘stalactites’.
(
56
) Replaced ‘torch-lit’ with ‘torchlit’. Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
(
57
) Replaced ‘torch-lit’ with ‘torchlit’.
(
58
) Replaced ‘this barrier, then’ with ‘this barrier; then’.
(
60
) Replaced ‘hesitates, then’ with ‘hesitates, and then’. Replaced ‘ ‘An okak oknar?’ ’ with ‘
‘An okak oknar?’
’.
(
62
) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘double all bonuses it bestows upon you (for the duration of this combat only)’ with ‘its power doubles in strength for the duration of this combat (+16
COMBAT SKILL
)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘possess’ with ‘wield’.
(
64
) Replaced ‘presses’ with ‘press’.
(
67
) Replaced ‘potholes’ with ‘pot-holes’.
(
68
) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(
69
) Replaced ‘man who you are’ with ‘man whom you are’.
(
70
) Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘Drakkar battle jacket’ with ‘Drakkarim battle-jacket’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
72
) Replaced ‘Liganim (with Ziranakag)’ with ‘Ligan (with Ziranakag)’ to reflect
standard usage
.
(
73
) Replaced ‘god’ with ‘God’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Weaponmastery’ with ‘Grand Weaponmastery’.
(
74
) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(
76
) Replaced ‘enough for 3 doses. Each dose restores 4
ENDURANCE
points after combat.’ with ‘enough for 3 doses — each dose restores 4
ENDURANCE
points after combat’. Replaced ‘bottles and’ with ‘bottles, and’.
(
77
) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(
80
) Replaced ‘here. within’ with ‘here within’ (the word ‘within’ also began on a new line which has also been fixed). Replaced ‘not over, it’ with ‘not over; it’.
(
81
) Replaced ‘shoulder down, then’ with ‘shoulder down; then’.
(
82
) Replaced ‘torch-lit’ with ‘torchlit’.
(
83
) Replaced ‘battleshield’ with ‘battle-shield’. Replaced ‘battered trunk and’ with ‘battered trunk, and’.
(
85
) Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills or’.
(
86
) Replaced ‘icy-cold’ with ‘icy cold’. Replaced ‘Grand Huntmastery and Grand Nexus’ with ‘Grand Huntmastery
and
Grand Nexus’.