The Black God's War (61 page)

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The Gods Divided
(Splendor and Ruin, Book II). If you’d like, I can also add you to my newsletter list, so that I can let you know about future releases. My email is
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And if we never chat or meet in this lifetime, that’s cool, too. My biggest goal as a writer is to inspire my readers to pursue their own passions, while pursuing my own. Now please, go forth and rock some worlds.

Speaking of rock, I don’t think I could’ve written this book without loud music blaring in my face. Or if I could’ve, the journey wouldn’t have been nearly as much fun. I’ll mention some of the music I listened to in the Acknowledgements, and then you’ll find a sample chapter from a new book written by a friend of mine who was also one of my editors for
The Black God’s War
, D.P. Prior. The book you just read (this one) benefitted a lot from his help, so if you enjoyed this work, you might enjoy his work, too.

Thanks again. Reading this book was the greatest gift you could ever give me. From my heart, I appreciate it.

Acknowledgments

My three editors: D.P. (Derek) Prior (a.k.a. “the fount of knowledge”) has probably done more to help me improve this book than anyone else. Joshua Essoe gave me some of the most brilliant suggestions I got about the novel, in addition to helping me with countless smaller issues. And Jillian Sheridan helped me tremendously with her incredible language skills. Anne “Arkali” Victory was an outstanding proofreader.

Brandon Sanderson read my first chapter in early 2010 and gave me some priceless advice. David Farland read my manuscript at one of his workshops and helped me tremendously. K.C. May and Penelope Schenk went above and beyond the call of duty as beta readers.

Here are some other people and websites I’d like to thank:

AbsoluteWrite, Authonomy, Chuck Taylor, Clancy Metzger, Colette Vernon, Colton Goodrich, Craig Saunders, Critters.org, D.T. Conklin, Damien Stolarz, David Anthony Durham, David Dalglish, David Kerschner, Debra L. Martin, Evan Braun, Grace Siregar, J.A. Konrath, Jan Bird, Jared Blando, Jessica Billings, Kevin J Anderson, Kylie Quillinan, Laura Resnick, Leah Petersen, Leigh Galbreath, Lenny Gredel, Libbie Mistretta, Lou Anders, Mark Phillips, Michael Tobias Herbert, Miranda Suri, Molly Siregar, Monique Martin, Nikki Neal, Rich W. Ware, Rinn Falconer, Scott Nicholson, Shaun Farrell, Steven Forrest, Tania Gilchrist, T.M. Roy, William Campbell, and Zoe Winters.

The writing of this story was powered by the album
The Hazards of Love
by The Decemberists. The editing was powered mainly by
Black Symphony
by Within Temptation. I also listened to this playlist a lot:

Lose Yourself, Eminem

Hurt, Johnny Cash

No Quarter (Live), Led Zeppelin

Grux & Shake Me Like a Monkey, Dave Matthews Band

Bard’s Curse, Kit Soden

Won’t Want for Love (Margaret in the Taiga), The Decemberists

Boy With a Coin, Iron & Wine

Catch and Release, Silversun Pickups

Joni(Stardust), Jozef Slanda

Different World & The Pilgrim & The Reincarnation of Benjamin Breeg, Iron Maiden

I want to say thank you to these musicians and to the muses who inspired them.

To make my playlist for book 2, I asked for song suggestions on my blog, on Twitter, and on Facebook. That effort turned up 20 amazing songs. If you want to hear the songs in my playlist for book 2, see my blog post on 7/28/11:

http://sciencefictionfantasybooks.net/?p=1902

About the Author

When I was ten, I fell in love with an anime series: a space opera spanning three human generations, a saga that unfolded over 85 consecutive episodes and four months of after-school TV. Watching
Robotech
was a spiritual experience for me. I still remember how high I felt after watching the final episode for the first time. How many pleasures in life are better than a well-executed drama?

After that experience, I decided I wanted to be a storyteller when I grew up, hoping to someday inspire others as
Robotech
inspired me. Although I’ve written professionally and for pleasure over the years, it wasn’t until recently that I got back to my heart’s desire when I was a boy: telling the big story.

I’ve never had so much fun.

Bonus Excerpt

Here’s an excerpt from D.P. Prior’s new release,
Cadman’s Gambit,
the first in his new series. Because his novel literally just came out, I haven’t read it yet. But if Derek can write half as well as he edits (he was one of my editors for this novel), his book should be incredible.

I may add another excerpt when my friend D.T. Conklin releases his first novel later in 2011. He’s a gifted writer, and I’m really looking forward to his debut,
Eulogy
.

Now here’s the first scene in the first chapter of D.P. Prior’s
Cadman’s Gambit
:

THE SWORD OF THE ARCHON

The whole world reduced to a point between the eyes of his opponent. The roaring of the crowd keeping beat with the pounding of blood in his veins. His sword dancing the tune of the flesh without the buffer of thought. Shader revelled in the ecstasy of combat but couldn’t wait to see the back of it.

Galen’s eyes flicked to the right as he feigned a thrust, turned his wrist and struck at Shader’s unprotected left—just as he was meant to. Shader parried and touched the tip of his blade to Galen’s chin. The big man fell back wiping the blood from his dimple and muttering beneath his moustache. First nick he’d had, Shader reckoned. Had to hurt his pride
.
Shouldn’t have boasted, then he wouldn’t have so far to fall.

He waited, sword loose at his side, as Galen tugged his uniform straight and puffed out his chest. The red jacket of the Templum Dragoons could get a whole lot redder yet if the bluff old sod didn’t yield. Galen frowned, raised his sabre and eyed Shader like he meant to hack the head from his shoulders. Some people never learn.

The attack was sudden—a flurry of jabs, an eviscerating slash, a butcher’s hack, all deftly blocked or slicing air.

‘Stay still you ruddy blackguard!’

The crowd laughed. Galen scowled. Shader lifted his blade in salute.

Scratching his whiskers, Galen began to circle him, thin strands of hair standing to attention over his great pink head. Shader had to give him credit: he was no coward and no mean fighter too. He’d watched him come up through the rounds, bashing aside the competition with a combination of skill and brute force. Good qualities for a swordsman; the kind that led to fame. Shame he was horribly outclassed.

Galen bellowed and charged. Shader swayed aside and scratched the back of his thighs as he passed. Could have hamstringed the idiot, but that would have been taking the contest a little too seriously. Galen spun and swiped, kicking, stabbing, spitting his frustration. Shader gave ground, rode out the storm and then broke off, resuming the en garde stance. Galen sucked in air, mopped sweat from his brow, and advanced. Shader stamped his lead foot, half-stepped, and then jump-lunged, jabbing him below an epaulette. Galen roared. His sabre arced down and Shader ducked, coming up straight into the path of a fist. His sword thrust on instinct and exited through the back of Galen’s hand. The big man yelped and then squealed as the blade tore free.

‘Forgive me.’ Shader put up his sword and took a step towards him.

Galen screamed and hacked with all his might. Shader deflected the blow but numbness shot through his arm. He switched the sword to his left hand, the blade twirling and glittering, sliding between Galen’s basket-hilt and fingers to send his sabre clattering to the floor. Shader pressed the point of his sword into Galen’s nostril.

‘I think you’re beaten.’

Galen went rigid, scarcely daring to breathe. His eyes flicked from Shader’s blade to his own.

‘You fought well, Galen, but it’s over.’

The big man’s chest heaved, threatening to pop the polished buttons from his jacket and rip the brocading. His head pulled carefully away from the tip of Shader’s sword, a finger probing inside his nostril to gauge the damage. Blood pooled from his pierced hand, dripping down his fingers and spattering his boots.

‘Do you yield?’

The crowd had gone deathly quiet. Galen scanned the Coliseum, face flushing as he acknowledged his supporters.

‘Yes, I bloody yield!’ He snatched up his sabre and stormed from the arena.

Shader spotted a dash of purple hurrying through the crowd and smiled. Adeptus Ludo scurried down the concourse, one hand flapping, the other holding his spectacles on his nose as he chased after Galen. Shaking his head with a mixture of amusement and affection, Shader bowed to the crowd, only now becoming aware of their sheer numbers. They filled tier upon tier of bleachers set between fluted columns and gaping arches. The applause fuddled his thoughts, burying them like an avalanche. He swayed as the sky lurched, stumbled and would have fallen had strong hands not steadied him.

‘A disorienting feeling—giving up the focus of combat for the baying of the mob.’ A clipped voice, measured and familiar. Ignatius Grymm.

The Grand Master led him by the shoulder towards the clerical enclosure, ramrod straight, one hand resting on the pommel of his dress-sword. Ignatius was everything the Elect were created to be: immaculate, efficient, and utterly obedient to the Ipsissimus. The old knight genuflected, bald patch an island amidst iron-grey hair as clipped as his voice. He lifted one arm to receive the benediction, sunlight glinting from mailed sleeves, the Monas symbol bleeding from his surcoat like a mortal wound.

‘Who do you present to the First of the Servants of Ain?’ asked Exemptus Cane, trembling with infirmity, clutching tight to the handle of his stick, a thin line of spittle glistening in the crease of his chin.

‘I present,’ Ignatius declaimed for the entire crowd to hear, ‘Deacon Shader, former Captain of the Seventh Horse, leader of the charge that broke the Verusian line at Trajinot, and now Keeper,’ he turned to take in the Coliseum, ‘of the Sword of the Archon.’

Give a blade a legendary name, Shader thought, and men would do anything to win it. Men like Galen. Men like all the others he’d beaten on his way to the final. If the Archon wasn’t just a myth, the last thing he’d need was a sword, and it wasn’t very likely he’d approve of such a brutal display in order to claim it. The Templum was many things to many people, but for Shader it was consistent only in one: the paradox of a brotherhood of love, born from the ashes of the Old World and enforced by the legions.

Exemptus Cane nodded, licking his lips, wet and rheumy eyes sliding to appraise Shader.

‘Are you consecrated?’

‘I am, your Eminence.’ Had the senile old fool forgotten that he’d been the one doing the anointing? That was the sad truth about the Templum, Shader thought: all that talk about the uniqueness of each and every Nousian, but in reality they were just numbers drifting down the stream of obscurity.

‘Good, good.’ The Exemptus seemed to have run out of things to say, his tongue clicking as he looked over his shoulder towards the supreme ruler of the Nousian Theocracy.

Ipsissimus Theodore was seated like a god, white robes perfectly contiguous with the gleaming throne, a huge leather bound Liber open on his lap, giving the impression he continually meditated upon the scriptures, that he was in fact their human embodiment. He was a small man, gaunt and deathly pale, the white biretta perched perilously too far to one side of his head. Bright eyes stabbed at Shader from within sunken sockets. Eyes full of vitality and the rumour of a quick mind.