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A phrase is a group of words that serves a particular function in a sentence. Usually, this function is analogous to a part of speech.

A phrase can include one or more words.

Phrases are referred to by the functions they fulfill within their sentences.
There are “noun phrases,” “verb phrases,” “prepositional phrases,” “adverbial phrases,” et cetera.

Examples:

In the sentence

The cat who lives next door likes my pineapple tree.

o
The cat is a noun phrase.

o
lives next door is a verb phrase.

o
The cat who lives next door is a noun phrase that includes the noun phrase The cat and the verb phrase lives next door

o
likes my pineapple tree is a verb phrase

o
my pineapple tree is a noun phrase.

o
(There are other phrases that could be said to exist in this sentence, but you get the idea.)

Don’t worry if this doesn’t make a lot of sense! The SAT doesn’t actually test your knowledge of phrases, or your ability to pull phrases out of a sentence. We’re only covering these ideas so that when we say, “the noun phrase such-and-such,” you’ll have some idea what we’re talking about.

A clause is a group of words that includes a subject noun phrase, a verb phrase, and, if necessary, an object noun phrase.

Example:

This is a complete clause:

This pizza recipe requires cheese.

o
This pizza recipe is the subject noun phrase.

o
requires is the verb phrase.

o
cheese is the object noun phrase.

A clause can be either “independent” or “dependent.”

A “dependent” clause begins with a conjunction.

An “independent” clause does not begin with a conjunction.

Example:

In the sentence,

You have to sleep more because you study too much.

o
You have to sleep more is an independent clause because it has all the elements of a clause and does not start with a conjunction.

o
because you study too much is a dependent clause because it starts with the conjunction because.

For the mult
iple-choice questions on the SAT Writing Section, every correctly written sentence must contain at least one independent clause.

Clauses and commas

Independent clauses cannot be separated from each other by a comma.

Examples:

This is a bad sentence on the SAT:

*I have not yet begun to fight, time is on my side.

o
I have not yet begun to fight is an independent clause including the subject pronoun I and the verb-form have begun.

o
time is on my side is an independent clause including the subject noun time and the copular verb-form is.

This is an acceptable sentence on the SAT:

I have not yet begun to fight; time is on my side.

Conditionals

A “conditional” is a statement that uses the conjunction
if
. Properly written conditional sentences avoid using the word
would
in the clause that begins with
if
.

Examples:

This is a bad SAT sentence:

*I would have stopped by your house if I would have known you were home.

o
would have stopped is acceptable because it appears in the clause I would have stopped by, which does not contain the word if.

o
if is the conditional conjunction.

o
would have known is incorrect here because it uses the word would in the same clause where the word if appears.

This sentence is acceptable on the SAT:

I would have stopped by your house if I had known you were home.

o
would have stopped is acceptable because it does not appear in the same clause as the conjunction if.

o
if is the conditional conjunction.

Dangling participles

A participle is a special verb-form that can end in
–ing
,
-en
, or
–ed
. They’re often used at the beginning of a sentence.

Example:

In this sentence,

Screaming for help, the mailman ran away from the angry dog.

Screaming
is a participle.

When these participles are used in standard written English, they are always understood to refer to the first noun phrase in the independent clause in the sentence.

Example:

In the sentence  above,

Screaming for help
is the participial phrase, beginning with the participle
screaming
(an
–ing
word)

the mailman ran away from the angry dog
is the independent clause (remember that an independent clause has a subject noun phrase and main verb phrase).

We know this participle was used correctly because the word
screaming
describes the word
mailman
, which is what we wanted to do.

Example:

This sentence would be completely INCORRECT on the SAT:

*Screaming for help, the dog chased the mailman down the street.

What’s wrong with that? We still have a participial phrase (
screaming for help
) and an independent clause (
the dog chased the mailman down the street
), but the problem is that the participle in this sentence can’t possibly describe the first noun phrase in the independent clause, which is
the dog
. This sentence is no good because the dog can’t scream. Only the mailman can scream.

Participles show up often in the SAT Writing Section, and they’re frequently used incorrectly, so look out for them!

Higher-Level Concepts: Ideal Sentences And Paragraphs On The SAT

Now that we’ve talked about the basic underlying grammatical rules you need for the SAT Writing Section, we need to discuss the sorts of things that the SAT considers to be “good” usage. To do this, we’ll talk in terms of the “bad” and “good” patterns that appear on the SAT.

On the SAT Writing Section, ideal sentences are the ones that avoid certain “bad” patterns and make us of certain “good” patterns. The fewer “bad” patterns and the more “good” patterns a sentence has, the more “SAT-ideal” the sentence is.

“Bad” patterns that often appear in errors on the SAT Writing Section.

“Good” patterns that indicate correct usage on the SAT.

-ing
words

Errors on the SAT Writing Section often involve
-ing
words that don’t correctly modify nouns they refer to, or that don’t belong in a sentence at all.

Use of an
–ing
word so that it correctly modifies the first noun phrase after the comma in the sentence is acceptable on the SAT Writing Section; otherwise, avoid
–ing
words whenever possible.

-ed
words

Errors on the SAT Writing Section often involve
-ed
words that don’t correctly modify the nouns they refer to.

Use of an
–ed
word so that it correctly modifies the first noun phrase after the comma in the sentence is also acceptable on the SAT Writing Section.

pronouns

Errors on the SAT Writing Section often involve the use of pronouns when they aren’t needed or when they don’t refer to any particular noun.

Pronouns that agree with their main nouns in number are okay. It’s also okay to use either
you
or
one
, as long the usage is consistent. Finally, pronouns must clearly indicate which nouns they’re replacing.

non-parallelism

Errors on the SAT often involve the use of conjunctions when the ideas joined by the conjunction are not in the same form.

Words and phrases joined by conjunctions should use parallel structures.

incorrect verb-forms

Conjugating verbs incorrectly is an error on the SAT.

All verb use must be consistent with normal, standard usage.

non-agreement

Using a pronoun that doesn’t agree in number with its noun, or a verb that doesn’t agree in number with its noun or pronoun, is an error on the SAT.

All pronouns in a correctly written sentence must agree in number with their main nouns, and all verbs with their nouns or pronouns.

“Bad” patterns that often appear in errors on the SAT Writing Section.

“Good” patterns that indicate correct usage on the SAT.

adjectives versus adverbs

On the SAT, using an adjective to describe anything besides a noun is an error.

All adjectives in a correctly written sentence are used to describe nouns. Words that describe anything else appear as adverbs.

as
in general

On the SAT, the word
as
is likely to appear in poorly written sentences.

 

The word
as
can appear in a correctly written SAT sentence when it is used to compare two or more things, or when it’s part of a phrase that correctly modifies the first noun that appears after a comma.

verb tense

On the SAT, incorrect sentences often have verbs in multiple tenses.

 

Correctly written sentences on the SAT either place all verb phrases in the same tense or properly signify a tense shift with a time expression like
before
or
next year
.

commas separating complete clauses

Incorrectly written sentences on the SAT often use EITHER a comma OR a conjunction to separate two complete clauses.

 

Correctly written sentences on the SAT either separate complete clauses with a semicolon or dash, or add a conjunction like
since
,
because
, or
and
between the comma and the beginning of the second clause.

to be, to become

When the verb
to be
or
to become
is the only verb in a clause, incorrectly written SAT sentences often make the nouns on either side of the verb differ in number.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences make the noun phrases on either side of
to be
or
to become
appear in the same number.

removing
to be
when possible

Incorrectly written SAT sentences often include the verb
to be
when they don’t need to.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use the verb
to be
either to equate two ideas or as a helping verb for other verbs-forms.

removing
the
when possible

Incorrectly written SAT sentences sometimes use
a
,
an
, and
the
when they aren’t necessary.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use articles to modify noun phrases only when they’re needed.

“Bad” patterns that often appear in errors on the SAT Writing Section.

“Good” patterns that indicate correct usage on the SAT.

parallelism with
than

Incorrectly written SAT sentences might use comparisons with
than
when the two things being compared don’t have parallel structures.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use comparisons with
than
only when the structures of the two things being compared are parallel, in order to assure that the proper things are being compared.

either/or
versus
either/and

Incorrectly written SAT sentences occasionally use
and
with
either
.

When correctly written SAT sentences use the word
either
, it appears with the conjunction
or
, not
and
.

idioms—prepositions

Incorrectly written SAT sentences sometimes misuse the prepositions in common idioms.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use the normal prepositions in everyday idioms.

proper pronoun usage (he/him)

Incorrectly written SAT sentences might use subject pronouns where object pronouns should appear.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use object pronouns as the objects of verbs and prepositions.

conjunctions at beginning of sentence

Incorrectly written SAT sentences often begin with conjunctions even though there are no independent clauses in the sentence.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences only begin with conjunctions when they include independent clauses later in the sentence. In other words, it’s possible for a sentence to be grammatically acceptable on the SAT even if it begins with the word “because,” as long as the sentence also contains an independent clause.

if
and
would have

Incorrect SAT sentences use
would have
instead of
had
immediately after
if
.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use
had
in
if
phrases, not
would have
.

removing
which
when possible

Incorrectly written SAT sentences use
which
when they don’t need to.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences avoid
which
whenever possible.

relative pronouns—personal with people

Incorrect SAT sentences use impersonal pronouns to take the place of personal nouns.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use personal pronouns to replace personal nouns.

comparatives

Incorrectly written SAT sentences use both
more
and
–er
to form comparatives.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences use either
more
or the suffix
–er
—not both—to form comparatives.

avoiding conjunctions

Incorrectly written SAT sentences might use conjunctions where they aren’t necessary.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences only use conjunctions when necessary, and use them to link ideas appropriately.

phrases in place of “and”

Incorrectly written SAT sentences might use phrases like “in addition to” or “as well as” instead of “and.”

 

Correctly written SAT sentences only use the word “and” itself wherever “and” is appropriate. They don’t just phrases like “in addition to” or “as well as” instead of “and.”

“it” and “they”

Incorrectly written SAT sentences might use the pronouns “it” and “they” without a clearly specified noun elsewhere in the sentence that matches the pronoun in number.

 

Correctly written SAT sentences only use the pronoun “it” when it refers to a singular noun elsewhere in the sentence, and they only use the word “they” when it refers to a plural noun elsewhere in the sentence.

About Paragraphs

Ideal paragraphs on the SAT are paragraphs that contain as few concepts as possible.

When adding a sentence to a paragraph in the Improving Paragraphs portion of the SAT Writing Section, add the sentence that contains the fewest concepts that are not already in the paragraph.

When removing sentences from paragraphs in the Improving Paragraphs portion of the SAT Writing Section, remove sentences that introduce concepts that do not appear elsewhere in the paragraph.

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