Rough Draft (43 page)

Frank rocked back in his chair, put his feet up on the desk, and gave the photo a careful appraisal. Didn't take him more than a second to see she'd gotten better-looking over time. Lost the baby fat in her cheeks, the softness around the eyes, the mechanical smile. Five years later and the lady had a hard-edged elegance about her, a no-nonsense stare, eyes that could nail you to the fucking wall and keep you there. She had a better haircut now, did her makeup better, the whole look these days was more natural, more real. As luminescent as Ingrid Bergman but still with a street-tough edge. Somebody you could take home and show your mother and dad, if you had a mother and dad.

A burst of static on his computer speakers woke him from the daydream.

Fielding was talking again. Frank straightened. He could tell immediately that something about Fielding's voice was different. Sheffield leaned forward, rolled up the volume knob.

“I wanted so very much to talk to you in person, Hannah. I was hoping you would come to my bedside so I could take your hand in mine, ask for your forgiveness. But it's clear now that my little plan has failed, and you're not going to make it here in time. I'm dying, Hannah. They tell me I only have a few hours left.”

Frank peered at the screen. This wasn't Helen Shane's script. Fielding's mouth was moving, a little out of synch with his words as always. Although the voice sounded somewhat like his, the words were totally different from what Frank heard when he'd reviewed the tape last weekend.

“So what I've done, Hannah,” Fielding said, “I've taken
the liberty of making certain financial arrangements on your behalf. I've spoken to my lawyer just now, and he's drawn up the appropriate documents naming you as the sole proprietor of my estate. The money will be yours, Hannah. Yours and your son's to do with what you will. I have instructed officials at the Grand Cayman National Bank to put the account in your name. The full amount is being transferred as I speak. To ensure safety, since I'm communicating with you in this public way, I've sent the account number and identification procedures to your son's E-mail address. These numbers are encrypted, though it is my understanding that Randall, your boy, has the sufficient computer skills to access these files.

“I want you to know, Hannah, that I'm not trying to buy your forgiveness. You may do whatever you want with the money. Whatever your conscience dictates. I simply wanted you and your son to have some small offering, a compensation for the great harm I've done to you and those you loved.”

“Hey, Frank.”

Sheffield's chair squeaked harshly as he rocked back. Marta Veetro was in the door to his office, giving him one of her big southern smiles. Recently transferred from Atlanta, a thirty-something special agent who'd somehow managed to resist Frank's charms for the last few months.

“I heard your operation shut down.”

“Ssshhhh.”

He held up his hand and turned back to the monitor. But Fielding was finished now. He was drinking water, mopping his face with his washcloth. Every movement was a struggle. His head dropped back against his pillow and he closed his eyes. In a few hours he would breathe his last.

Frank was on his feet.

“Jesus Christ, she doctored the video. She set a goddamn trap.”

“What?”

Marta stepped back out of Frank's way.

“Hey, Sheffield, wait!”

He was sprinting down the corridor toward the alley exit. She yelled after him.

“Somebody called you, Frank. Something urgent from Miami PD.”

Frank slid to a stop at the exit door. Marta hurried after him.

“Lieutenant Romano,” she called. “Homicide.”

Frank waited for her.

“Something about a kidnapping. A kid named Randall.”

“Now aren't you glad we didn't kill the kid?”

“It's a trap,” Hal said. “I can feel my needle quivering.”

They were parked on the shoulder of the road a half a block from Hannah Keller's house. It was dark. No moon. A strong breeze full of moist, yeasty scents, blowing from the west, like maybe there was a storm in the Everglades heading this way.

“What needle?” Misty said.

“The needle in my chest. When it quivers, something's wrong. And it's quivering now. Quivering a lot.”

“Fuck,” she said. “So what do we do?”

“We just drive away.”

“Leave the money?”

“The needle's quivering. This isn't right.”

“Hey, this is my goddamn inheritance we're talking about. You're just going to let him hand it over to that bitch?”

Hal looked out into the darkness.

“Let me think,” he said. “Give me a second of quiet.”

“Jesus, Mother of Mary,” she said. “You're just like every other guy I've ever known. Everything's peachy nice until push comes to shove. Then when it really matters, you're going to make the decision all on your own, not even listen to me. Like I don't count. But that's my money in there, Hal. That's my birthright. You don't get to decide what happens with that. I don't care how much your fucking needle is quivering. You hear me? You hear me, Hal?”

“I hear you.”

“What're you, stupid? We're this close. All we have to do is walk across the street, have the kid get the numbers off the computer, we're home free.”

“I'm not stupid,” he said. “I'm not mentally retarded.”

“Well, then stop fucking acting like it. This is my money. Stop acting like some gutless moron and let's go get what belongs to us.”

He looked across at her. His face was different. Bland like it had been a couple of nights ago when he showed up at her bedside, pinched her nipple. A burst of icy air washed across her neck.

“Sorry for the inconvenience,” he said.

“Inconvenience? What the fuck are you talking about now?”

But as Misty asked the question, she saw his hand come through the dark. The right hand, the one with the barb on the thumb. She saw it snake toward her and felt his fingers seize her throat. For a second Misty thought it was a joke, a little playful tussling. The roughhousing some guys resorted to when Misty stung them with her acid tongue. But that impression only lasted a second, then she felt the power in his grip, the cold iron fingers, his hand as sleek as marble clamping off her air.

“I'm not stupid,” he said quietly as if he were speaking to someone else, someone far away in his memory. “I'm not retarded or slow.”

Little starbursts twinkled inside Misty's eyes. A spray of red and green dots. Brain cells winking out. The handheld computer tumbled from her lap. Her father lay on the floor mat at her feet, sad old man gasping for air. Just as she was gasping.

“I knew it was a lie,” he said. “Love and God and fun. A bunch of lies.”

She could feel her eyes rolling up, she could hear the snaps and splinters of tissues and tendons in her neck. But through the haze, a thought was forming in her head. No, not a thought, more like a word. A single word. She felt her eyes
close, felt her body slump against the car door. Her hand fumbling at her pocket. The word was clear now. A single word. An old friend.

Derringer.

Hannah heard a sharp pop, like a thick branch snapping in the rising wind.

She sat at Randall's desk. His place of power, the one spot on earth where he felt truly safe.

She listened to the wind strain against the house. Listened to the quiet cracklings of the old wood structure as it stood its ground. That wood was heart of pine. Ancient, dense, and heavy. Carpenters dreaded it. Their drills burned out trying to penetrate its grain, their best nails bent double against its iron surface. It was the only organic thing Hannah knew that grew stronger over time. It was tougher on this particular night than it had ever been in its history.

She listened to the old timbers creak and pop.

She had told her story now. Beginning to end. Her words displacing Helen Shane's. And if she was going to see her son alive again, it was because her story had won out. Because it seemed sufficiently real. That was the only trick she knew. Words, words, words. Her story against theirs.

She heard the planks creak, a harsh chirp in the floorboard. She heard the rustle of the avocado leaves, the dry, papery rattle of palms. She smelled the freshening air, a sugary current passing through the house, leaving a ripple across the flesh of her neck. She felt the quietest of shifts in the barometric pressure and knew they were here. They were inside the house.

She kept her eyes on J. J. Fielding. Once more she watched the old man die. The tension in his face relaxing, the slow unraveling of his breath.

They were coming down the hallway. Their quiet passage, their faint disturbance of the atmosphere. She willed herself to relax, to keep her eyes on the screen. She felt die flutter in her gut, the warm, rising pressure in her blood.

They were at the doorway behind her, poised.

She took an even breath and swiveled her chair around. Aimed the .357 at the doorway.

“Well, look what we have,” the girl said. “A standoff.”

She had a small silver pistol pressed to the side of Randall's head.

“Hold on, Randall, it's going to be all right,” said Hannah. “Trust me. Everything's going to be just fine.”

The boy opened his mouth to reply but no sound escaped him and he shut it again. He was swaying as if to music only he could hear.

“Put your piece down now,” Misty said. “Or I'll drop the boy.”

Randall's gaze drifted left and right as though the music he was hearing was sending him into a swoon.

Hannah turned and set the pistol beside the keyboard.

“Did my old man send you the money or didn't he?”

Hannah said nothing. She was watching Randall, watching his loose-jointed waver, his limber dance.

“He didn't, did he? It was all a he.”

“Yes, he did,” said Hannah. “It's somewhere in Randall's computer. But I don't know how to get it out.”

Misty had her pistol jammed against Randall's temple. Gripping his shoulder with her other hand. The boy looked like he might collapse any second. Like the blood in his veins had vaporized, turned to useless foam.

She studied Hannah for a long moment, then prodded Randall forward.

“Now you get up on your feet, bitch, and stand over there. Better yet, sit down on the edge of the kid's bed. Way back against the wall so you can't come bolting at me. Do it. Do it now.”

Hannah sat down on the edge of the bed, then slid backward until her shoulders were propped against the wall.

Misty steered Randall to his chair and eased him down.

“Now, honey, you're going to find the E-mail my daddy sent. Find me that, decode it, and I'll just be on my way.”

Randall sat at his desk. His hand reached for the mouse. He stirred it around on its pad. Misty shot Hannah a triumphant smile, then turned back to the computer.

“He listens to me,” Misty said. “Hell, he's more my kid than yours.”

Randall moved the mouse and Hannah could see the screens changing. He was working his way through the directory, searching for an E-mail file that didn't exist.

“Here it is,” he said softly. “I found it.”

Hannah leaned forward on the bed.

Misty stooped down and angled close to the screen. Rising from his chair, Randall stepped to the side to give her room.

“I don't see anything,” she said. “Just a lot of computer gibberish.”

Randall's hand was a blur as he scooped up his grandfather's pistol, and spun, lobbing the weapon ten feet through the air to Hannah. Without a flicker of hesitation, she caught the pistol, found the grip, raised it, aimed, and fired a single shot into the meat of Misty's buttocks.

Yowling, the girl spun sideways. Her own pistol fired, exploding the monitor in a blast of sparks. She tumbled to the floor, sobbing. She ground her face into the wood planks, clutching at her wounded butt

Hannah tossed the pistol onto Randall's bed and she and Randall stood together looking down at Misty Fielding as she squirmed and writhed like some electrocuted eel.

Hannah lifted Randall into her arms and hugged him, cradling his head against her breasts. He whimpered softly, taking quick, erratic breaths.

“You're all right now. You're safe. Everything's going to be just fine.”

But as she spoke the words, she glimpsed through the haze of her tears a wide-shouldered shape filling the doorway to the room.

Grunting, the man staggered forward. There was a ragged patch torn through the shoulder of his shirt and the spreading stain of blood.

Hannah lowered Randall to the floor and angled in front of him. Beside the bed, Misty groaned and hammered the floor with her fist.

Hannah watched the man inch closer, a grim smile playing on his face. His eyes were dark and they seemed dazed as if he had been staring too long into a bonfire.

“This is a nice place you have, Hannah. Big yard, lots of trees. Very private.”

“I'm so pleased you like it, Hal.”

“The kid's lucky, growing up like this. Plus, he doesn't have a father, which might be a good thing too.”

Randall took hold of her hand and moved to her side, facing the man.

“So what do you want to do,” Hannah said, “sit down and trade recipes?”

The man looked perplexed. His face was running with sweat. He stood between her and the bed where the pistol was propped against the pillow.

“A happy childhood is important,” he said. “Not everyone is so lucky. Some kids grow up around dead people. They see naked bodies every day lying on metal tables. Naked women and children and they have to wash and disinfect their dead skin. That's not a good childhood. Not like this place, with the trees and the grass and the birds.”

Hannah watched him glance around Randall's room, taking
it all in, the desk, the smashed monitor, Spunky in his cage. His smile tinged by a hazy sadness as if perhaps this room was what he'd been yearning for all these years.